Editing clients

I edit documents, proposals, newsletters, articles, web content, speeches and more.

The longest piece I edited was “Appendix A” for the master landscape plan of a nature reserve in Panama, the only foreign property of the Smithsonian Institution. The original appendix, from an architectural/design firm, contained 110 pages. I began by removing passive verbs and the verb to be, thus reducing the page count to 84.

I found inconsistencies, unanswered questions and poor Spanish phrasing (I speak French). I created a glossary and a list of acronyms, made the fonts and formatting consistent and improved basic grammar and sentence structure. Best editing project ever.

Other editing clients include

  • Academy House Condominiums
  • Arbor, Inc.
  • Beck Institute for Cognitive Therapy
  • Campbell Soup Company
  • Central City Toyota
  • Commonwealth of Pennsylvania, Council on the Arts
  • DermaMed Solutions
  • Eisenhower Exchange Fellowships
  • Elwyn, Inc.
  • FMC Corporation
  • Franklin Institute
  • GlaxoSmithKline
  • Greater Philadelphia Hotel Association
  • Hanna/Olin
  • Institute of Pennsylvania Hospital
  • Kling Architecture/KlingStubbins (now Jacobs)
  • Living Beyond Breast Cancer
  • O’Donnell & Naccarato
  • Pennsylvania Council on the Arts
  • Philadelphia Workforce Development Corporation
  • Presbyterian Medical Center
  • R. M. Shoemaker Construction
  • Reiff & Bily Law Firm
  • Scott Paper Company
  • Shared Medical Systems
  • Smithsonian Institution
  • Spectacor
  • Sporting Club Bellevue
  • Subaru of America
  • Temple University Legal Aid Office
  • University of Pennsylvania, Penn Law Journal
  • University of Medicine and Dentistry of New Jersey
  • University of the Arts
  • William Penn Foundation